Correction Writing Partial I

This activity is of the week 05

In this area I put my first, second draft and the final draft about the “My favourite vacation"

First Draft

My favourite vacation was in the last year. My parents and siblings were the tourist at Guanajuato and also we visited all our family.

This vacation was very interesting and wonderful because in this year my father bought a dog for my brother. This dog is very beautiful and your name is Dogy.

The vacations with my family are fantastics, wonderful and interesting. I'm going to the next year at Mexico with my family and my best friend because these people are very importants for me.

Second Draft

My favourite vacation was in the last year. My parents and siblings were (the) tourists at Guanajuato and also we visited all our family.

This vacation was very interesting and wonderful, because in this year my father bought a dog for my brother. This dog is very beautiful and your name is Dogy.

The vacations with my family are fantastics, wonderful and interesting. I'm going to the next year at Mexico with my family and my best friend, because these people are very importants for me.

Final Draft

My favourite vacation was in the last year. My parents and siblings were tourists at Guanajuato and also we visited all our family.

This vacation was very interesting and wonderful, because in this year my father bought a dog for my brother. This dog is very beautiful and its name is Dogy.

The vacations with my family are fantastic, wonderful and interesting. I'm going the next year to Mexico with my family and my best friend, because these people are very important for me.