Week 03 - My favourite quote

This activity is of the week 03

In this area I put my first, second draft and the final draft about the “MY FAVOURITE QUOTE”

First Draft

“MY FAVOURITE QUOTE”

"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them"

 Walt Disney

This phrase was wrote by Walt Disney and it a quote very beautiful and moving. it is my favourite quote because is very true that when we are going to decide or take the initiative of achieve someone all our dreams can become to reality.

Is very true that is easy when we say "In this semester I will visit more to my family" or "I will fail not any subject in all my career" but If you want and have the courage for achieve your dreams, in a future I am going to achieve them.

All the dreams can reaching  If and when we are know that want and wish reach for example when I finish the university my dream and goal is create a family business only with my parents and siblings.

Second Draft

Final Draft

“MY FAVOURITE QUOTE”

"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them"

 Walt Disney

This phrase was written by Walt Disney and it is a quote very beautiful and moving. It is my favourite quote, because is very true that when we are going to decide or take the initiative of achieve something all our dreams can become to reality.

Is very true that it is easy when we say "In this semester I will visit more to my family" or "I won't fail not any subject in all my career" If you want and have the courage for achieve your dreams, in a future I am going to achieve them.

All the dreams can be reached  If we know what we want and wish reach for example when I finish the university my dream and goal is to create a family business only with my parents and siblings.