Week 02 - My greatest achievement

This activity is of the week 02 

In this area I put my first, second draft and the final draft about the “What Do You Consider Your Greatest Achievement so far?"

First Draft

“What Do You Consider Your Greatest Achievement so far?"

In the past I think that my greatest achievement was got a scholarship by of the job the my father and thus can study during all my high school.

Although now I think that my greatest achievement is can live and at the same time study out the my house because I was studied and lived in Veracruz from kindergarden to high school. While I lived  with my family I depended much the them.

Other greatest achievement is can learn to cook for myself. For example I learn to cook pumpkins with cheese, churros and Crepas with nutella and strawberrys.

In short I want and wish to be more self-sufficient now.

Second draft

Final Draft

“What Do You Consider Your Greatest Achievement so far?"

In the past I think that my greatest achievement was to get a scholarship by the job my father has and thus could study during all my high school.

Although now I think that my greatest achievement is to be able to live and at the same time study out of my house, because I studied and lived in Veracruz from kindergarden to high school. While I lived  with my family I depended much them.

Other greatest achievement is learn to how cook for myself. For example I learn to cook pumpkins with cheese, churros and Crepas with nutella and strawberries.

In short, I want and wish to be more self-sufficient now.