Week 04 - WRITING "My most embarrassing experience"

First Draft

I wash to share my next experience because is a form the that all we learn of the bad and good experiences of others and thus we won't make in a future. I hope all can learn the this experience.

All my life I have been too shy and when I began the high school in my two semester I didn't have any friends. Those days was terrible stifling for me. In my third semester all was the same but a day in recess a classmate told me: Can you talk? In that moment I wash to cry but after she told me: Come on!! Come on!! You should play with us. After all my days in high school was very beautiful and wonderful. In all the recess we played from cards to policies and robber.  

Now that I remember those days I only ask me, Why didn't I talk? This was really 

embarrassing, I only have that talk. I hope to chance each day and achieve my goals.

Second Draft

Final Draft

My most embarrassing  experience

I want to share my next experience because is a form that we all learn of the bad and good experiences of others and thus we won't make in the future. I hope all can learn this experience.

All my life I have been too shy and when I began the high school in my two-semester I didn't have any friends. Those days were terrible stifling for me. In my third semester, all was the same but a day during break recess a classmate told me: Can you talk? On that moment, I wanted to cry but after she told me: Come on!! Come on!! You should play with us. After all my days in high school were very beautiful and wonderful. In all the recess, we played from cards to policies and robber.  :)

Now that I remember those days I only ask me, Why didn't I talk? This was really embarrassing, I only have to talk. I hope to chance each day and achieve my goals.